Comments on: When Time Takes a Nap http://www.vinodnarayan.com/poetry/when-time-takes-a-nap/ Vinod's Personal Blog Mon, 06 Feb 2012 14:42:54 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Clara Sheeba http://www.vinodnarayan.com/poetry/when-time-takes-a-nap/comment-page-1/#comment-502 Clara Sheeba Fri, 09 Jul 2010 00:25:33 +0000 http://www.vinodnarayan.com/?p=582#comment-502 According to Marxian thoughts 'everything is subject to change' :) If it is right, the time will have to wake up by itself after that nap, if nobody comes to wake it up ! According to Marxian thoughts 'everything is subject to change' :) If it is right, the time will have to wake up by itself after that nap, if nobody comes to wake it up !

]]> By: vinodn http://www.vinodnarayan.com/poetry/when-time-takes-a-nap/comment-page-1/#comment-501 vinodn Sun, 04 Jul 2010 21:46:28 +0000 http://www.vinodnarayan.com/?p=582#comment-501 "The sleeping never know it happen" means the ones who are asleep never know the time taking a nap as they themselves are not awake. But the "awake thoughts" are people who are awake and thinking they freeze, and then memories die as they live only when the present and future exists. <br><br>Your comments taken well and I guess the lines might not have conveyed the message as above :) and teh wordings might have been out of place “The sleeping never know it happen” means the ones who are asleep never know the time taking a nap as they themselves are not awake. But the “awake thoughts” are people who are awake and thinking they freeze, and then memories die as they live only when the present and future exists.

Your comments taken well and I guess the lines might not have conveyed the message as above :) and teh wordings might have been out of place

]]> By: Fizadawn http://www.vinodnarayan.com/poetry/when-time-takes-a-nap/comment-page-1/#comment-498 Fizadawn Sun, 04 Jul 2010 10:24:36 +0000 http://www.vinodnarayan.com/?p=582#comment-498 When time takes a nap<br>The sleeping never know it happen<br>The awake Thoughts freeze<br>And Memories die<br><br>Didn't go well with the entire poetry.<br>Yes, many times man forgets what he or she is doing and the realization comes when it becomes a practice..!<br>Time never takes a nap - it we who decide as when to wake up and that sometimes becomes too late!<br>Keep writing<br>Cheers When time takes a nap
The sleeping never know it happen
The awake Thoughts freeze
And Memories die

Didn't go well with the entire poetry.
Yes, many times man forgets what he or she is doing and the realization comes when it becomes a practice..!
Time never takes a nap – it we who decide as when to wake up and that sometimes becomes too late!
Keep writing
Cheers

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